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16.3.26托福独立写作机经预测构思

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1
A or D? In the modern world, we should never be impolite to another person.

思路一:
观点:Agree(用拆分法)
主体段一:polite to parents and teachers
主体段二:polite to friends and acquaintances.

思路二:
观点:Disagree(绝对词)
主体段一:impolite to offensive behaviors(展开:对不遵守社会规则的人,对不尊重我们的同事,陌生人,同学等都可以给子正当的指示或维权,老师对不尊守纪律的学生必须严厉)
主体段二:impolite to criminals



2
(Preference) Some people prefer to buy technological devices as soon as they are available on the market, while other people prefer to wait. Which do you prefer?

观点:wait
主体段一:Waiting means better quality of the technological devices.
主体段二:more economical (save money)



3
(逻辑关系) It is often not a good idea to move to a new city or a new country because you will lose touch with old friends.

观点:Disagree
主体段一:Moving to a new city or a new country will not necessarily result in the loss of old friends.
主体段二:People still can make new friends when moving to a new place.



4
A or D: The opinions of celebrities, such as entertainers and athletes, are more important to the younger people than they are to the older people.

观点:Agree(看到题目提到entertainers and athletes 马上进行拆分即可)
主体段一:The opinions of entertainers exert much more influence on the young than on older people. (年轻人比老年人更喜欢追求新潮时尚的东西,也通过各种娱乐工具接触到了明星,所以就更容易受影响)
主体段二:The younger people are more likely to be inspired by the athletes. (年轻人运动的多,更爱运动,所以关注体育明星等比较多,就容易被他们影响)



5
(三选一)Which do you think is the best way for a student to make new friends: joining a sports team, participating in community activities, or traveling? Use specific examples to support your answer.

观点:joining a sports team

主体段一:more communication and cooperation among team members (展开:为了团队成功,大家要进行很多次赛前,赛中,赛后的互相沟通,协作coordination, 配合;了解彼此的优势劣势,共同探讨取得胜利的方法等, 有了这些共同沟通和信任后,就很容易成为朋友)

主体段二:We need to help each other out when confronted with setbacks during the competition. (展开:可能大家会在比赛中失利,也可能有人会受伤,还有可能压力很大等,我们会困难面前帮助彼此,所以也更容易成为朋友:A friend in need is a friend indeed.)

主体段三:Compared with joining a sports team, though we may meet different people, we hardly make real good friends. (展开:社区活动和旅游一般都是独立行为,而且都是很短的时间,很难有深刻的了解和共同经历使彼此成为朋友)



6
(今昔对比) A or D: It is easier for more people now than in the past to get an education.

观点:Agree
主体段一:technological advancement
主体段二:better financial condition



7
A or D: Younger school children (from age 5 to 10) should be required to study art and music in addition to math, language, science, and history.

观点:Agree
主体段一:relax
主体段二:to be versatile
主体段三:nurture creativity



8
(今昔对比) A or D: Young people today are less dependent on their parents than in the past.

观点:Agree
主体段一:busy work schedule of parents
主体段二:The young become more capable to independently solve problems due to today's quality education they receive and advanced technologies.



9
A or D: Spending a lot of time watching sports on TV and following one's favorite team will have a negative impact on one's life.

思路一:
观点:Agree(注意 a lot of)
主体段一:may lead costly lifestyle(展开:钱会花在各种比赛门票,各种纪念品,甚至follow suit明星的穿着打扮)
主体段二:detrimental influence on study and work efficiency

思路二:
观点:Disagree(忽略a lot of,并不跑题)
主体段一:be inspired by super-star athletes and their sportsmanship
主体段二:relax



10
A or D: It is better to relax by watching a movie or reading a book than by engaging in physical exercise.

观点:Disagree
主体段一:strengthen physical health
主体段二:great opportunities to enlarge social circle



11
A or D: It is important for the government to provide money for things that are beautiful and not just for things that are practical.

观点:Disagree(拆分practical things)
主体段一:develop public transportations
主体段二:fund technological development
主体段三:upgrade medical care and environment



12
A or D: At present, people spend too much time doing things for their enjoyment, i.e. what they like to do rather than what they should do. (这道题看到too much, 可以当做绝对词处理,找例外就好写多了,下面用拆分法给大家一个新的思路)

观点:Agree
主体段一:People today are too indulged in smart phone.
主体段二:Most people are always hanging out
and getting together with friends for fun in their spare time.



13
(今昔对比)A or D:It is much easier now for parents to raise children than 50 years before.

观点:Agree
主体段一:better financial condition
主体段二: Technological advancement provides much convenience and help for parents in terms of raising children.



14
(绝对词)A or D: For any business to be successful, one must spend a lot of money on advertising.

观点:disagree

让步段:广告挺重要的。能宣传公司。能帮助建立良好的公司形象. 但是,再好的广告都无法确保一个质量超差的产品会给公司带来成功。

主体段一:Product quality deserves more investment. (讲创新,讲技术,讲设计)

主体段二:Dedicating money to maintaining customer relationship could more efficiently pave the way to business success. ( 展开:customer 会带来word of mouth; 是free 的spokesperson, 所以要用售后或提高增值服务value-added service等来维持客户关系; 数例:培养新客户的投入是维持老客户的5倍)

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15
A or D: Schoolwork or jobs with challenges and difficulties have more effect on our happiness than easy schoolwork or jobs.

观点:Agree
主体段一:pursue better self-advancement and sense of accomplishment  
主体段二: Mostly, people get bored and become inefficient readily when repeating easy jobs.



16
A or D: The rules that young people must follow and obey in today's society are too strict.(2015.1.31题目, 这道题建议用拆分法)

观点:disagree
主体段一:Rules regulating the young's performance in school is never too strict.
主体段二:Some rules in terms of the young's behavior in families are also of great significance.
主体段三:Laws and social regulations are meant to be obeyed by every citizen, including the young.



17
A or D: Modern agriculture method damages the environment, but provides food for the growing population around the world. It is more important to feed the world population than to protect the environment.

观点:Disagree
主体段一:The environment is directly associated with every citizen's health, thus deserving more attention.
主体段二: We have to pursue better ways to control the food issue, which should not be at the sacrifice of our environment.



18
A or D: Although science and technology will continue to improve, the most significant improvement in the quality of people's lives has already occurred.

观点:disagree
主体段一:Many environmental problems still deserve more of our effort to solve.
主体段二:Future development might also create more opportunities for medical treatment.
主体段三:开个玩笑吧,也许可以上月球呐,解决下房价问题,呵呵。还有什么空中道路解决堵车问题,当年去上海有幸看到了一个对未来50年生活的假设,厨房里都是种菜的。还有太多可能性了。



19
A or D: More and more people are beginning to spend large sums of money on their pets, even though there are better ways to spend this money.

一:观点:Agree
思路一拆分法:
主体段一:too much money on pets' food
主体段二:too much money on pets' medical caring
主体段三:too much money on pets' look

思路二分析利弊:
主体段一:It is worthwhile spending much money on pets, since for children, it can help them to cultivate some practical skills and sense of responsibility.
主体段二:For many of us, dedicating large deal of money on pets is also necessary owing to the companionship we gain from it.

二:观点:Disagree
主体段一:Many people do not raise pets at all, so how come they spend money on them?
主体段二:Raising pets does not necessarily cost too much.
主体段三:People are committing a large deal of money to other more important things.



20
(绝对词) A or D: The most important characteristic of a successful politician or leader is the ability to communicate well.

观点:Disagree
让步段:Communication skill is indispensible to a successful leader in a large sense. 展开为什么. Nevertheless, it is multiple virtues combined together that make a real eminent leader, (and therefore it is an exaggeration to say that communication skill is of the most significance.
主体段一:planning and organizing ability
主体段二:honesty



21
A or D: The advice from grandparents is of no use for their grandchildren because the world has changed too much over the past 50 years.

观点:agree
主体段一:Children today become more capable of solving a wide range of problems independently. (展开:可以谈年轻人受的教育,经历,和现代科技)
主体段二:The ideas and concepts of the elder are generally so obsolete(过时的) that they can hardly offer the young practical and plausible(可行的) help. (展开:重点谈代沟,和过去的落后跟现在的差距)



22
(绝对词) A or D: The most important investment for a company is to spend money to improve the work skills of its employees. (相关话题:学校提高老师工资,gov花钱)

观点:disagree

让步段:Improving the work skills of a company's employees is indispensible to some extent. 经过training,seminars 或者其他的conference,员工可以提高自己的expertise and acquire more skills,所以可能会把这些能力投入到公司产品的开发中。Nevertheless,(weaken the point)并不是所有同事都自愿通过这些方式来提高自己的能力,公司可以投钱到研发设备上和直接提高员工工资来更好增加竞争优势。(注意让步段三步走)

主体段一:Advanced technological facilities deserve more financial support from the company to create more competitive products. (展开补充词汇:研发research and development)

主体段二:A company could directly raise employees' salaries to boost their morale. (展开补充词汇:以金钱来激励:incentivize)



23
(三选一)Which of the following courses do you recommend most for high school students to take: cooking, personal financial management, automobile repairing.(这道题预测一万年了,因为像做饭和基础金融是常见话题,还有各种多学历史,学艺术,学经济学,学科学的题目;所以经常会从practical skill, academic burden, feasibility and family bond 等角度来探讨)

思路一:
观点:financial management
主体段一:lead a frugal/thrifty(勤俭的) lifestyle
主体段二:prepare for the future university study and adulthood
主体段三:Cooking takes too much time and most high school students do not drive

思路二:
观点:cooking
主体段一:Cooking courses definitely afford students much more practical skill.
主体段二:Compared with cooking, taking courses regarding personal financial management is quite a burden for high school students.
主体段三:Driving lessons is also unnecessary.



24
A or D: People can solve important problems by themselves or with the help from their family members, so there is no need for the government to help them. (相关题目:政冶家做的贡献)

观点:disagree(可当绝对词处理,government is capable of solving a lot of other matters that are beyond the ability and power of families.)

让步段:家庭的帮助确实挺大的。家庭给我们一些工作建议,扩大社会关系等。但是,生活中还有很多重要的方面和问题,比如健康和我们所享受的城市基础建设,家庭也无法给我们保证,对于这些问题,gov却能帮助我们。

主体段一:The government ensures our safety and health to a large extent. (展开:谈军事,治安,环境污染,食品安全等法规,这些都是家庭无法保证的)

主体段二:Fundamental facilities are mostly established by the government. (展开:学校,医院, 公园,公路等,这些也基本超出家庭的财力和能力)



25
对比类)A or D: Children should spend more time playing and studying rather than helping the family with household chores, like cooking and cleaning.

观点:disagree(household chores)

主体段一:It helps to enhance the family bond when children are helping their parents with the household chores.

主体段二:Children can cultivate certain practical skills through doing household chores and running errands for their parents. (通过wipe the desk, clean the room, make the bed, tidy up the apartment, mop the floor, cook some food,students become more independent; 自己住dormitory;自己在办公室工作;结婚有family之后可能都需要这些能力)

(主体段三:doing housework provides necessary physical exercise. 展开:energy-consuming)



26
绝对词)A or D: It is impossible to be completely honest with your friend.

观点:agree
主体段一:white lies(善意的谎言)
主体段二:privacy and business secrets are not supposed to tell others. ( 展开:weight, age, family scandals; every family has a skeleton in the cupboard; agreement, password etc.)



27
(Preference) Some jobs pay the employees high salaries, but require them live far away from their family and friends. Other jobs pay low salaries, but allow the employees to live closer to their family and friends.Which job would you prefer and why?

观点:high salary, live far away
主体段一:A handsome sum of financial reward contributes to our great sense of happiness. (展开:自己爽,家人爽,别人爽)
主体段二:Living far away is not necessarily a disturbing concern when we choose a job. ( 展开:有好处:独立、自由;住的远现在也可以经常视频等家人聊天,飞机也就几个小时)
主体段三:Some high-paying jobs generally means a brighter future career. (接受挑战,经历挫折,锻炼独立解决问题能力,升职。举例:华为和中兴的国外外派太常见了)



28
(逻辑关系)A or D: In order to attract good students, many universities have to spend a lot of money on social activities.

观点:Disagree
主体段一:social activities 不是学生在选学校的时候最关心的方面。
主体段二:学校其实可以招聘名师和购买先进教学设备来吸引学生。



29
A or D:(今昔对比)Teachers are not as appreciated and valued nowadays as they were before.

观点:Disagree
主体段一:University teachers are hold higher today than the past. ( 展开:故意讲现在大学老师一般多才多艺,经历丰富,学习高,学术研究伟大,思维和教学方法先进,仍然处于不能被替代的位置)
主体段二:Secondary school teachers are also more respected and appreciated than before. ( 展开:现在中小学老师更注重学生的学智体美劳,身体心理等各方面发展,老师也变得更caring and responsible than before.)



30
(绝对词)A or D: The most important goal of education is to help people educate themselves?

观点:同意(虽然是绝对词,但是如果不同意不好写,所以选择同意,主要讲自学的好处就行)
主体段一:Independent self-study ensures the accomplishment of students' academic study.
主体段二:Strong learning ability also paves individuals career success.


给大家推荐一个学习托福口语的好去处:一个我当时报得外教口语课,跟外国人交流口语提升确实很快,因为英语是他们的母语,很多平时我们需要苦思冥想才能表达的东西他们不经意间就说出来了,跟着外教老师学习,在语言环境的感染下,口语练习往往能事半功倍
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发表于 2016-6-26 14:16 | 显示全部楼层
考个托福,对于出国的人来说还是很有帮助的
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